Really good on the verses but the chorus needs to be more full. maybe like some more percussion and extra vocals. maybe change up the main rhythm. its just a bit empty thats all. Other wise it was mad good.
Really awesome job with the whole thing. One general criticism is you need to be careful with pitched noises. some of your hard noises are pitched and dont match the key. Other wise great job. Another thing. you should try the intro with out changing the pitch of the bass drum.
Thanks for the feedback, always appreciate it. =) Also, I realized the changing pitch in the intro wasn't so good. Just haven't felt like going back and changing it. hah
I comment on this song as a huge hardstyle fan and im in the process of making some myself. Great melody but NEEDS MORE BASS. the tok is good but the resonating pitch underneath. It could also use a bit larger synth for the melody. The fills were seriously awsome. 5/5 9/10
good song but needs some work
Again really good but at 1:43 u need a better bass. plus if i were you i would try to layer the vocals with the melody u use after. At 3:30 it feels like it looses and momentum. it almost seems like a lot of songs put into one. If i were you i would work on the bass and kinda split this one up into separate songs and use more percussion.
But good job :)
i like most of the melody work as well.
Really good song. I love the variety of synths and upbeat nature. My only criticism is in the chord progression, I felt it needed at V chord either in the second or fourth chord, it would have made or a better resolution but overall really good. 5/5 9/10
could be the most catchy song ever lol. Truly amazing.
hey lesbopenguin BTW to download it just hit the button that looks like a floppy disk under the stop button lol
I like the chord progression but the song constantly builds to nothing. It never hits a climax(which is kind of a problem for and orgy lol) and its veeeerrrryyyy repetitive. It need a booming bass a powerful classic, drum beat, and a catchy melody. I do like the mixing a lot that is somthing i am not very good at. U should check out some of my stuff too if you get a chance :)
overall good job
well originally this song was supposed to be accompanied by lyrics, which would explain the repetitiveness...but anyways, thx for the feedback =D
really awesome song. I love the beat especially in the beginning and end. I also love the synth used for the eighth note runs. my only criticism would be to add a more intense melody but idk if it would even work. its something to consider if you decide to remake it.
if you get a chance check out my newest song kilogram i always appreciate reviews :)
Great song! i really like the melody all through out the song especially at the end but i thought the melody kinda got lost in the begining from 1:00 to 1:22 and the ending was allitle weak but other then that great synth work, great effects and great overall job
BTW i also write techno u should check out my new song kilogram
Ur song are musically interesting but a lot of isn't is head bopping. U should try to make some hard beats and brighten it up a bit. If you use brite synths, loud bass, and a fast beat ul be golden. try to make something that makes you want to dance.
I've been thinking about it lately and havn't gotten to it yet :P The song i'm making right now is pretty dang dark so it'll probably be a while...sorry, thanks though. I'm going to work right now, so i'll review some of your songs later tonight. thanks for the review!
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