MelonChucker's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Feel the Power (Hardstyle)]

Great song

Really awesome job with the whole thing. One general criticism is you need to be careful with pitched noises. some of your hard noises are pitched and dont match the key. Other wise great job. Another thing. you should try the intro with out changing the pitch of the bass drum.

DJT3chnic responds:

Thanks for the feedback, always appreciate it. =) Also, I realized the changing pitch in the intro wasn't so good. Just haven't felt like going back and changing it. hah

[Electro Orgy]

Good start

I like the chord progression but the song constantly builds to nothing. It never hits a climax(which is kind of a problem for and orgy lol) and its veeeerrrryyyy repetitive. It need a booming bass a powerful classic, drum beat, and a catchy melody. I do like the mixing a lot that is somthing i am not very good at. U should check out some of my stuff too if you get a chance :)
overall good job
7/10
4/5

R2Productionz responds:

well originally this song was supposed to be accompanied by lyrics, which would explain the repetitiveness...but anyways, thx for the feedback =D

[Chaos Reigns <Blue Iris>]

pretty good

Ur song are musically interesting but a lot of isn't is head bopping. U should try to make some hard beats and brighten it up a bit. If you use brite synths, loud bass, and a fast beat ul be golden. try to make something that makes you want to dance.

lidlurch responds:

I've been thinking about it lately and havn't gotten to it yet :P The song i'm making right now is pretty dang dark so it'll probably be a while...sorry, thanks though. I'm going to work right now, so i'll review some of your songs later tonight. thanks for the review!

[Technological Jazz finalcrapft]

wow

way to take the presets off of garage band. most of them i have heared lol nice try. the mixing was decent tho.

lidlurch responds:

lol yeah, I said that in the description. it's catchy, but very stolen... xD

[Dream Runner Revampd-lidlurch-]

Over all pretty good

I like all of the melody variation and the melodies are awesome, but u need better synths i find (if u use garage band) dont mess around with presets just start with an instrument generator and create ur own. the drums could be allitle more powerfull too

lidlurch responds:

I didn't know there was an instrument generator :P really? I thought they were too loud. Interesting, thanks for the review!

[Shades of Rave]

Nice Start

its a pretty cool song with some kick ass beats! i wish i could do beats like that but it lacks musicality with a stronger bass line and chord progression you could get away with a less intense melody

nice start good luck

Cheezer20 responds:

thanks, ill keep those things in mind for my next song. yeah good point on the chords and bass

[Polarity_UPD]

Incredible!

True fantastic song. I absolutely love all the effects. Although around 2:22 and 2:28 the chord doesn't sound right to me but other then that it is truly amazing. 10/10 5/5
This is defiantly going on my ipod

P.S. I've written some music my self but i use garage band and its kinda hard to add effects and stuff. This is probably a stupid question but can you actually write sheet music in fl studio or just import/record tracks?

mooseymaniac responds:

Yeah I know, the chord was wrong for one instrument at that point, for some reason I couldn't find the right one. My ear failed me. you totally can write sheet music in FL!... except it's not really on a sheet. It's more like MIDI.