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wow

way to take the presets off of garage band. most of them i have heared lol nice try. the mixing was decent tho.

lidlurch responds:

lol yeah, I said that in the description. it's catchy, but very stolen... xD

Over all pretty good

I like all of the melody variation and the melodies are awesome, but u need better synths i find (if u use garage band) dont mess around with presets just start with an instrument generator and create ur own. the drums could be allitle more powerfull too

lidlurch responds:

I didn't know there was an instrument generator :P really? I thought they were too loud. Interesting, thanks for the review!

Unique

Its really catchy u just have to highlight the good parts and fix the rough parts. Form listening to the song it doesn't seem like you have much music background more less just beats which is cool but the middle sounds off with the chords.

Nice!

I like it! awesome beats and some solid melodies. Having said that i find it quite od that u chance the V chord from minor to major in the middle of the song. I think the both of them sound odd in the song together. Other than that i like it.
5/5 9/10

awsome

Amazing song! my only complaint is the dialogue in the the middle it really bothers me but that probibly just other than that truly fantastic great melody and synth work
5/5 10/10

PS if u feel up to it u should post a version with out the dialogue in the middle lol.

Nice Start

its a pretty cool song with some kick ass beats! i wish i could do beats like that but it lacks musicality with a stronger bass line and chord progression you could get away with a less intense melody

nice start good luck

Cheezer20 responds:

thanks, ill keep those things in mind for my next song. yeah good point on the chords and bass

pretty sweet

lol me and my friend were in band and we just randomly thought of this songs and then i see it on newgrounds lol pretty ironic i must say.

Its a very neat song, quite original. very impressive!

Incredible!

True fantastic song. I absolutely love all the effects. Although around 2:22 and 2:28 the chord doesn't sound right to me but other then that it is truly amazing. 10/10 5/5
This is defiantly going on my ipod

P.S. I've written some music my self but i use garage band and its kinda hard to add effects and stuff. This is probably a stupid question but can you actually write sheet music in fl studio or just import/record tracks?

mooseymaniac responds:

Yeah I know, the chord was wrong for one instrument at that point, for some reason I couldn't find the right one. My ear failed me. you totally can write sheet music in FL!... except it's not really on a sheet. It's more like MIDI.

Decent song

Its a pretty good song but just the fact that u have quotes from willy wonka makes this song unbeleivable

Great

I too was looking for a rendition on the original but i think i could have been a little faster and allitle more hard core with the base but over all great job :)

I am a normal kid who just loves techno. I write my own stuff hoping to contribute to the awsome collection here on newgrounds.

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